Objectively, the text is clear, so I guess a solution along the lines of some of the suggestions* made in this thread would be more apt than actual textual changes.
(you seeing the blush of my cheeks shining through the screen for not having read the paragraph well enough… )
But thinking of the ’ SQUIRREL!’ Charlie_Venio mentioned : perhaps leave it at the first two bullets and have the other text appear below it?
Now there is really so much out there requiring attention the word 'discussion’s the link threw me of because:
- I was looking for the words ’ help’, or ‘starting’ (or ’ for dummies’ - I mean, just deciding on what the right saver would be already tripped me up… (‘discussing’ is a two way street and no matter how much I regret it: I’m not bringing anything to any discussion at this point in time)
- Feeling a just a tad awkward about the above
- Generally aware that I’m missing the knowledge / vocabulary to be precise (think writing ‘multi-platform’ when it turns out I’m actually in need of ‘cross-platform syncing’…and then some)
Especially the last one is less of a personality aspect and more of a common issue I think.
*Of course it’s easy to also spout more time-consuming ideas other than a lay-out / format change but perhaps it’s useful nevertheless:
I found this line of thinking helpful. Perhaps instead of many bullets : one newbie tag pill or button leading straight to proper location / buttons that filter the available discussions along the lines of
- I want to use TW - where / how to start (potential / absolute beginner)
- I have TW up and running just fine - now what? (beginner to medior)
- Tweaks, depths and other fine stuff (advance users / niche inquiries)
and / or a writing prompt for either a first time post, or a button so it can be used if you choose so, e.g.:
- what do you want to use TW for (use case / ideal situation where everything goes as expected
- what problem do you run into?
- what OS, browser and cloud server do you (mostly) use